Heart-pang Rhyme

Easy work to criticize
Effusions of the heart.
Harder far to vocalize
A Cupid-rendered smart.

Easy to be sickened by
A love pang sung in rhyme.
Not so simple to describe
A dart disease that’s mine.

Hard to make these verses scan
With regularity.
Worse to keep them in the can–
To heck with dignity!

In reply to this WordPress daily writing prompt: http://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/criticize/

 

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Author: Rhyme In Time

I write for a living. For no kind of living whatsoever, I also write poetry and study the Korean language. And I help raise a cat with my wife.

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